[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-toffset-07.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Tue, 16 September 2008 10:04 UTC
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-avt-rtp-toffset-07.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 16 September 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC. Comments: Acronyms should be expanded in the title of the draft and on their first use (e.g., RTP). Capitalization of the Section headings is not consistent. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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