[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-dime-diameter-cmd-iana-01.txt

Scott Brim <scott.brim@gmail.com> Mon, 21 September 2009 18:50 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-dime-diameter-cmd-iana-01.txt
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 2009-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-22
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Comments: Not a big issue but: if you do revise it, consider putting in
a little more about the motivation.  Without naming names, what were the
"questionable design decisions" and why were they an issue?

Scott