[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-mgmt-16.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 24 May 2014 03:05 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-mgmt-16.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-system-mgmt-16.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2014-05-24 IETF LC End Date: 2014-05-13 IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-29 Summary: Ready (still) -------- Comments: --------- The recent changes are all improvements.
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