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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

NITS: 2

1) NIT: typo

In section 5: s/datapalne/data-plane/

2) NIT: reported by IDNits

In section 6.1:

  == Missing Reference: 'RFC5120' is mentioned on line 301, but not defined

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