Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03

[Dick Brooks <[e-mail]>]

Also, regarding:
>     This specification does not allow for vulnerability information to be
>     retrieved directly from the endpoint.  That's because vulnerability
>     information changes occur at different rates to software updates.

In practice today, consumers are indeed retrieving vulnerability information directly from the vendor endpoint where SBOM's are being distributed. SBOM Vulnerability Disclosure Reports (VDR) can update independently from an SBOM, but remain at a given URL for download. An example of this method is available online using the AWS client software for demonstration only:

https://github.com/rjb4standards/REA-Products/tree/master/C-SCRM-Use-Case

AWS-CLI SBOM: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/rjb4standards/REA-Products/master/C-SCRM-Use-Case/AWS_SBOM.spdx 
AWS-CLI VDR:  https://raw.githubusercontent.com/rjb4standards/REA-Products/master/C-SCRM-Use-Case/AWSCLIVDR.xml 

FYI: VEX is a different form of vulnerability disclosure, reporting CVE info on a product level, i.e. Log4j, whereas the SBOM VDR reports CVE's at the SBOM component level. These are not competitive offerings, they are complementary offerings.

Thanks,

Dick Brooks

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-----Original Message-----
From: OPSAWG <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Eliot Lear
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03

Hi Russ,

And thanks for your review. Please see below.

On 13.12.21 23:02, Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Almost Ready
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2021-12-13
> IETF LC End Date: unknown
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>
> Summary: Almost Ready
>
>
> Note: I am not a good persone to review the YANG specification.  I 
> assume one of the YANG Doctors will have a look at this document too.
>
>
> Major Concerns:
>
> Section 1 says:
>
>     To satisfy these two key use cases, objects may be found in one of
>     three ways:
>
> This lead to some confusion for me.  Earlier in the document, it says:
>
>     This specification does not allow for vulnerability information to be
>     retrieved directly from the endpoint.  That's because vulnerability
>     information changes occur at different rates to software updates.
>
> After thinking about it, I realized that the objects do not include 
> vulnerability information, but pointers to obtain vulnerability 
> information.  Please reword to others do not need to give it the same 
> amount of thought.

What I propose is first the following early on in the introduction:

> This memo doesn't specify the format of  this information, but rather 
> only how to locate and retrieve these    objects.



>
>
> Minor Concerns:
>
> Section 1, first sentence: The reference to "A number of activities"
> is very vague.  It is not wrong.  Please be more specific, provide 
> some references, or drop the vague reference altogether.

It'd be fun to reference an executive order.  Never done that before.

>
> Section 1 says:
>
>     In the second case, when a device does not have an appropriate
>     retrieval interface, but one is directly available from the
>     manufacturer, a URI to that information must be discovered.
>
> s/must/MUST/ ?
>
Sure.


> Nits:
>
> The terms "software" and "firmware" are used with essentially the same 
> meaning in this document.  If there is a difference, it needs to be 
> explained.  If they are the same in the context of this document, 
> please say so.

I've removed the term "firmware".

> Abstract, last sentence: please add "(MUD)" and also a pointer to RFC 
> 8520.

I think this got rewritten.  Let me know when you see the update.

Thanks again for the review.

    Eliot