Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-p2pi-cooper-workshop-report-01.txt
Cullen Jennings <fluffy@cisco.com> Mon, 27 April 2009 22:51 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-p2pi-cooper-workshop-report-01.txt
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Thanks for the review. On Mar 26, 2009, at 12:34 AM, Suresh Krishnan wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for > draft-p2pi-cooper-workshop-report-01.txt > > For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Summary: This draft is well written and easy to read. I cannot > comment much on the contents of the draft since it is just reporting > events that occurred at a workshop. I think the draft is ready for > publication as Informational RFC. > > Meta comment > ============ > I think this document should be Informational and not Standards > track as stated in the draft. Yes, this was a slip up with xml2rfc. It is going forward as Informational and I inserted an RFC Ed note to make sure this did not get lost. > > > Editorial comments > ================== Thanks - I have put in an RFC Ed note for all three of these. > > > * Page 4: > s/properietary/proprietary/ > s/seperate/separate/ > > * Page 8: > AQM is undefined. Did you mean QAM? Either way please expand at > first use. Adaptive Queue Management was meant here. I will put in a note to expand that as you suggested. > > > * References > The reference with anchor [RFC2474] points to RFC2475. Please fix it > to read RFC2474. > > Thanks > Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-p2pi-cooper-wor… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-p2pi-cooper… Cullen Jennings