[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-mpls-02
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-mpls-02 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 2007-10-18 IETF LC End Date: 2007-10-19 IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Comments: I'm not an expert in MPLS or PCN, but even then, the draft was surprisingly understandable (good writing, folks!). Couple of minor suggestions: - RFC 4301 should probably be informative rather than normative reference - The acronym "ECMP" should be expanded on first use Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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