[Gen-art] [gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-proxy-proto-08.txt

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 01 May 2009 22:39 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-proxy-proto-08.txt
     RSVP Extensions for Path-Triggered RSVP Receiver Proxy
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 1-May-2009
IESG Telechat date: 07 May 2009

Summary: This document appears ready for publication as a proposed standard.

(Note that the earlier review by Robert Sparks appears to be missing 
from the archive, so this reviewer can not verify that any issues Robert 
  found have been addressed.)

Yours,
Joel M. Halpern