[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-livingood-woundy-p4p-experiences-10
"Spencer Dawkins" <spencer@wonderhamster.org> Tue, 30 June 2009 17:05 UTC
Return-Path: <spencer@wonderhamster.org>
X-Original-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@core3.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D638528C417 for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Tue, 30 Jun 2009 10:05:35 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.376
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.376 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=0.223, BAYES_00=-2.599]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([64.170.98.32]) by localhost (core3.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id LqA2nIooMrRj for <gen-art@core3.amsl.com>; Tue, 30 Jun 2009 10:05:32 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mout.perfora.net (mout.perfora.net [74.208.4.194]) by core3.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A91F23A68E5 for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Tue, 30 Jun 2009 10:05:32 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from S73602b (w173.z064002096.dfw-tx.dsl.cnc.net [64.2.96.173]) by mrelay.perfora.net (node=mrus0) with ESMTP (Nemesis) id 0MKp8S-1MLgkc1obP-000Sqj; Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:04:17 -0400
Message-ID: <2D932DE94C1B433CB8ECE50834E08224@china.huawei.com>
From: Spencer Dawkins <spencer@wonderhamster.org>
To: chris_griffiths@cable.comcast.com, Jason Livingood <jason_livingood@cable.comcast.com>, Laird Popkin <laird@pando.com>, yry@cs.yale.edu
References: <5C3B4F7EC6014E4B80680F1F6487F8E9@china.huawei.com>
Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2009 12:03:38 -0500
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; format="flowed"; charset="iso-8859-1"; reply-type="response"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Priority: 3
X-MSMail-Priority: Normal
X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2900.5512
X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2900.5579
X-Provags-ID: V01U2FsdGVkX19OfwI2rWQ7szUiK3/mdIppoE26lvzvRdxofMB URlPmkNbiQwOtER4s8/f7+X0A8sLbw0QXkNpYUg2BPQHYayoBn bSOgCsZLTY8j3KwLG+ho+PdmkaNV0QrbhVdOgGHegA=
Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, Lisa Dusseault <lisa@osafoundation.org>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-livingood-woundy-p4p-experiences-10
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.9
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2009 17:05:35 -0000
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-livingood-woundy-p4p-experiences-10 Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins Review Date: 30 June 2009 IESG Telechat date: 02 July 2009 Summary: This draft addresses all issues that I identified in my review of version 07. Ready for publication as Informational (and we need more Informational drafts like this one). There is one problem that I inadvertently contributed to in my review: I mentioned that we usually put a "please delete this section" note to the RFC Editor for null IANA considerations, and that's present in v10, but there's also a "please delete this section" note for the SECURITY Considerations section (which is also null, but for the right reasons). Since the Security Considerations section is required for all RFCs, Lisa should probably add a note asking the RFC Editor to ignore the note in the draft ;-) Thanks (and "sorry!"), Spencer 7. Security Considerations There are no security considerations in this document. NOTE TO RFC EDITOR: PLEASE REMOVE THIS NULL SECTION PRIOR TO PUBLICATION. 8. IANA Considerations There are no IANA considerations in this document. NOTE TO RFC EDITOR: PLEASE REMOVE THIS NULL SECTION PRIOR TO PUBLICATION.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-livingood-wound… Spencer Dawkins
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-livingood-w… Livingood, Jason
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-livingood-wound… Spencer Dawkins