Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 25 June 2020 00:13 UTC

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Robert, thanks for your reviews of this document. Mike, all, thanks for your responses and the clarifications around TLS. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Jun 22, 2020, at 3:50 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2020-06-22
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13
> IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25
> 
> Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
> 
> My concerns have been addressed.
> 
> I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be
> misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the
> proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the
> -push document): OLD:
>    If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels
> New:
>    If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels
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