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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 14 February 2023 15:16 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2023 17:16:22 +0200
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Meral, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Jan 14, 2023, at 01:57, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2023-01-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-17
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
> comments than those on the list.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> The abstract (scope) may be re-written more clearly (Section 1 Intro is clear).
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