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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Fri, 17 September 2010 04:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt
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> I would suggest repeating the second paragraph of the Abstract
> at the start of the Introduction. It's really important that readers
> understand that this is a publication for the record. 

Makes sense. I have added this to my copy.

Jari

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