Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28
Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 09 May 2018 15:40 UTC
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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 09 May 2018 11:40:20 -0400
Cc: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, IETF Gen-ART <gen-art@ietf.org>, hipsec@ietf.org, draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal.all@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28
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Roni, thanks for your review. Miika, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Apr 9, 2018, at 8:05 AM, Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com> wrote: > > Hi Roni, > > On 04/08/2018 10:32 AM, Roni Even wrote: >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-?? >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review Date: 2018-04-08 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 >> Summary: >> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit. >> Major issues: >> Minor issues: >> Nits/editorial comments: >> In section 7 - "a new error type SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED >> in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10 > > good catch, I'll fix the reference in the next version. Thanks! > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>