[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-kitten-gssapi-naming-exts-14

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Tue, 24 April 2012 05:10 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-kitten-gssapi-naming-exts-14
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2012-04-24
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2012-04-26

Summary: Editorial nits remain

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Four editorial comments from my earlier review of -08 still remain in
the document:


Section 3:
   un-authentciated
SHOULD BE:
   un-authenticated

   follows.This
SHOULD BE:
   follows.  This

Section 7.5.1:
   gss_name_attribute_get()
SHOULD BE:
   gss_get_name_attribute()

Section 9:
   another situations
SHOULD BE:
   another situation