Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
"Alexander Clemm" <ludwig@clemm.org> Wed, 26 July 2017 15:07 UTC
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To: 'Susan Hares' <shares@ndzh.com>, 'Stewart Bryant' <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
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Thank you, Stewart! --- Alex -----Original Message----- From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Susan Hares Sent: Tuesday, July 25, 2017 10:23 AM To: 'Stewart Bryant' <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo.all@ietf.org Subject: Re: [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14 Stewart: Thank you for your review! To come back from IETF and immediately complete your review shows awesome dedication! Cheerily, Sue Hares -----Original Message----- From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Stewart Bryant Sent: Tuesday, July 25, 2017 12:52 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo.all@ietf.org Subject: [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-07-25 IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-19 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with a few minor English nits remaining. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I notice that a number of the editorial comments in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-09-genar t-lc-bryant-2016-12-12/ were not addressed, but I am sure the RFC Editor will pick them up. I notice that RFC7952 is in the reference list but not called out in the text. _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i… Stewart Bryant
- Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of d… Susan Hares
- Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of d… Alexander Clemm