Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Fri, 16 March 2018 18:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt
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Francis:

Thanks for the review.  The nits are so minor that I think I will leave them to the RFC Editor.

Russ


> On Mar 16, 2018, at 4:51 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20180315
> IETF LC End Date: 20180316
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - Abstract page 1: double space? in "U.S.  National"
> 
> - 5 page 5: reclassifing -> reclassifying
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

[Gen-art] review of draft-housley-suite-b-to-hist… Francis Dupont
Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-suite-b-to-… Russ Housley