[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-radext-rfc4590bis-01.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Tue, 22 May 2007 10:57 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-radext-rfc4590bis-01.txt
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Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft: draft-ietf-radext-rfc4590bis-01.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 22 May 2006

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.


Comments:

RFC 3579, which appears in the References, is an Informational RFC
(i.e., it is a down reference).

Section 2.1 explains that information sent over a TLS connection to the
RADIUS client may be sent in cleartext to the RADIUS server, but does
not give any recommendation on what to do in that case. A further
explanation or a recommendation would be useful.


Thanks,

Gonzalo




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