[Gen-art] Gen Art LC review of: draft-yevstifeyev-http-headers-not-recognized-11

Avshalom Houri <AVSHALOM@il.ibm.com> Tue, 18 January 2011 12:59 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
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http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you 
may receive.

Document: draft-yevstifeyev-http-headers-not-recognized-11
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2011-01-18
IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-14 (sorry for the late review)
IESG Telechat date: (if known) - 

Summary: The document is ready as an experimental RFC but English usage 
revision is a must.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Review of text from point of view of English usage is very recommended

Thanks
Avshalom