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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 07 February 2017 21:31 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
To: Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com>
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Hi,
  Thank you.

Best,
Meral

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Chuck Lever [mailto:chuck.lever@oracle.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, February 07, 2017 12:26 PM
> To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
> Cc: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
> 
> 
> > On Feb 7, 2017, at 2:45 PM, Meral Shirazipour
> <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
> IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> >
> > Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-bidirection-06
> > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> > Review Date: 2017-02-07
> > IETF LC End Date:   2017-02-07
> > IESG Telechat date: -
> >
> >
> > Summary:
> > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
> comments.
> >
> > Major issues:
> > Minor issues:
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> > -General: please consider spelling out acronyms at first use and use the
> acronym consistently thereafter.
> 
> To address this comment (and Jouni's related LC comment) I've introduced the
> following forward definitions:
> 
> - RPC = Remote Procedure Call
> 
> - RDMA = Remote Direct Memory Access
> 
> - RPC-over-RDMA - defined by citation
> 
> - NFS = Network File System
> 
> - XDR - removed all usage
> 
> - XID = RPC transaction ID, and capitalized consistently
> 
> - NULL probe - replaced with "RPC NULL procedure"
> 
> - ULP - replaced with "RPC Program"
> 
> - Chunks - defined before use, and added citation
> 
> 
> Please let me know if there are other unfamiliar terms I've missed, or if there is a
> particular inconsistent usage that should be corrected.
> 
> 
> > -[Page 6], "(ie. a "---->"(i.e., a"
> 
> Fixed.
> 
> --
> Chuck Lever
> 
>

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