Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-qpack-19

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Tue, 17 November 2020 06:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-qpack-19
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Hi Linda,

thanks for the review! Since the QUIC WG uses a Github Workflow I've created a separate issue for each of the items in your review and tagged you in it, see in-line responses for the precise issue link. All issues are tracked in the milestone https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/milestone/19

Since there are no issues raised, the single ticket at https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4382 is already closed.

Thanks,
Lars

> On 2020-11-17, at 8:13, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-quic-qpack-19
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2020-11-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-16
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The draft specifies QPACK, a compression format and method.  I think the draft is very clear.
> 
> Major issues:
> None.
> 
> Minor issues:
> None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> None.
> 
> Linda Dunbar
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