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"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 17 November 2011 08:39 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-dime-priority-avps-05.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-dime-priority-avps-05.txt
     Diameter Priority Attribute Value Pairs
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 7-July-2011
IETF LC End Date: 2011-07-20
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:  This document is still ready for publication as a Proposed 
Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
     The nits reports 70 lines that are too long.  This needs to be 
repaired.

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