Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-08

Thanks for your review, Peter!

Btw, I am trying to understand what happened when this document went to PS from INF. Last calls were definitely on INF.

Jari

On Nov 18, 2013, at 8:23 PM, Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> wrote:

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> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-08
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: Nov-18-2013
> IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-2013
> IESG Telechat date: Nov-21-2013
> 
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed
> Standard. [Ready with nits]
> 
> The draft describes a means by which Devices behind a residential gateway
> may discover the correct Location Information Server on the access network
> providing Internet access to residential gateway.  The Device may thereby
> gain access to certain location-based services.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits: 
> 
> Page 13, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change ³even in the² to
> ³even if the².  Insert ³degree of² before ³accuracy².
> 
> 
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