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Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Thu, 29 March 2007 10:16 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt
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Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.


Draft: draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 27 March 2007


Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.


Comments:

Abstracts should not contain references.

Reference [IEEE802.11i] is missing.

draft-ietf-msec-gsakmp-sec seems to have already been published as RFC 4535.


Thanks,

Gonzalo




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