Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Wed, 06 February 2019 04:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
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Okay. I will keep the last paragraph only. Thanks. 

Dino

> On Feb 5, 2019, at 7:59 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>; wrote:
> 
> On Tue, Feb 05, 2019 at 07:56:39PM -0800, Dino Farinacci wrote:
>>> Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last paragraph.
>> 
>> Are you sure? I just followed what RFC 8174 suggested. Give me reason to not follow it?
> 
> Yes, he's sure.
> 
> You pasted the text that 8174 inserted into 2119, when all you need is the
> bit after "Authors who follow these guidelines should incorporate this
> phrase near the beginning of their document:"
> 
> -Benjamin