Re: [Gen-art] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt

Hi,

I don't see all the changes that were discussed in this version, and the typo in
'propreitary' has not been fixed. This does not seem ready for the telechat to me.

Regards
   Brian

On 24/10/2017 02:00, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Layer Independent OAM Management in the Multi-Layer Environment WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Retrieval Methods YANG Data Model for Connectionless Operations, Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols
>         Authors         : Deepak Kumar
>                           Michael Wang
>                           Qin Wu
>                           Reshad Rahman
>                           Srihari Raghavan
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 35
> 	Date            : 2017-10-23
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document presents a retrieval method YANG Data model for
>    connectionless OAM protocols.  It provides technology-independent RPC
>    operations for connectionless OAM protocols.  The retrieval methods
>    model presented here can be extended to include technology specific
>    details.  This is leading to uniformity between OAM protocols and
>    support both nested OAM workflows (i.e., performing OAM functions at
>    different levels through a unified interface) and interacting OAM
>    workflows ( i.e., performing OAM functions at same levels through a
>    unified interface).
> 
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