[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines-01

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
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Document: draft-iesg-sponsoring-guidelines-01
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: February 14, 2007
IETF LC End Date: February 21, 2007

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Comments:

Should this be a BCP (Best Current Practice) document?

I saw a few editorial nits that the RFC editor will correct.
idnits 2.02.1 didn't find anything to complain about.

Section 5 says:

   If it
   is likely that the document would generate a 3, 4 or 5
   response based on RFC 3932 it is not appropriate for an
   independent submission.

While RFC 3932 should remain the authoritative specification
of the responses, a summary of the nature of the responses
(3=harmful to IETF work, 4=violates IETF procedures,
5=extends an IETF protocol without IETF approval) would be
useful here.

Thanks,
--David
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