[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-5395bis-02.txt

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Mon, 03 January 2011 20:02 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-5395bis-02.txt
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-05
IESG Telechat date: 2011-01-06

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

Perhaps the "Annexes" (Appendices?) should be after the references.