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Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

Willem Toorop <willem@nlnetlabs.nl> Tue, 07 February 2023 10:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
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Hi Russ, Lars and Roman,

Thank you for your review Russ. Your (minor) concerns have all been 
addressed and we will soon upload a new version of the draft with, 
amongst others, your concerns and nits addressed.

Lars and Roman, this reply also addresses your IESG comments on the use 
of the word "meaningless".


Op 03-12-2022 om 20:17 schreef Russ Housley via Datatracker:
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.  Please add one,
> even if it says that there are no actions for IANA and asks the
> RFC Editor to remove the section when the document is published.
> Such a section provides clarity during IANA review of the document.

A new, soon to be uploaded, version will have a IANA Consideration 
section with a registry request for catalog zones properties. It can be 
previewed here:

https://github.com/NLnetLabs/draft-toorop-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones/blob/master/draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones.md#iana-considerations-iana



> Section 3 says:
> 
>     Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RR in the catalog zone which is
>     meaningless to or otherwise not supported by the implementation.
> 
> I am unsure what is meant by "meaningless".  Please define the term
> or provide some explanation.

We have rephrased the sentence without the word "meaningless" as follows:

     "Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RRs in the catalog zone for 
which no processing is specified or which are otherwise not supported by 
the implementation."

In this commit:

https://github.com/NLnetLabs/draft-toorop-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones/commit/737bcfe


> Nits:
> 
> Section 2 provides a list to definitions.  Please add some form of
> punctuation after the word being defined (a colon or a hypen or
> something else to aid the reader).

Thanks! Done in commit 
https://github.com/NLnetLabs/draft-toorop-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones/commit/3f55e43


Lars and Roman, I believe we have responded to all your IESG comments 
now. Can you confirm?

Thanks

Willem Toorop on behalf of the draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones co-authors

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