Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-lmap-yang-11

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 16 March 2017 14:31 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Vijay!

On 16 Mar 2017, at 22:27, Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-lmap-yang-??
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review Date: 2017-03-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16
> 
> Summary: Ready as a Proposed Standard.
> 
> Major issues: 0
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> Minor issues: 0
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 1
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> Nits:
> - S3: s/devided/divided/
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