[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-16

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 11 February 2018 12:54 UTC

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Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 04:54:15 -0800
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-16

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-11
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE
implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto
..."  change to "convey"

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i… Roni Even
Re: [Gen-art] [Ice] Genart last call review of dr… Peter Saint-Andre
Re: [Gen-art] [Ice] Genart last call review of dr… Alissa Cooper