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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 19 April 2018 01:38 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 18 Apr 2018 21:38:13 -0400
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Francis, thanks for the review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Oct 9, 2017, at 9:13 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20171002
> IETF LC End Date: 20171009
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - ToC page 2 and 11 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
> 
> - 2 page 3: there is now a RFC updating 2119 to solve the lower case
>  keyword issue. I don't know if there is a policy about this, e.g.,
>  improving the standard 2119 reference text. I'll ask to the gen-art.
> 
> - 3 page 4: "a small number of implementations may still require"
>  for instance of (not ambiguous) use of a 2119 keyword in lower case
>  (so now a priori in its English language meaning).
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
> 
> PS: BTW I know this draft before being assigned as its gen-art reviewer,
> I even pulled a request to define these OIDs in Botan...
> So thanks to have done that!
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