[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-huston-hd-metric-02.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Sat, 27 May 2006 09:21 UTC
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-huston-hd-metric-02.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 27 May 2006 IETF LC Date: Started 26 May 2006 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Comments: The draft lacks an IANA Considerations Section. In the text, Appendix A is sometimes referred to as 'Appendix A', and sometimes as 'Attachment A'. I would suggest to always use 'Appendix A'. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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