[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ethernet-traffic-parameters-10.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Thu, 18 February 2010 11:20 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ethernet-traffic-parameters-10.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-ethernet-traffic-parameters-10.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 18-Feb-2010 IETF LC End Date: 22-Feb-2010 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - On section 8, the text reads: "This document introduces no new security considerations to either [RFC3473]". The presence of the word "either" hints for a second reference, besides RFC 3473. Is this second reference missing, or does the word "either" need to be removed? /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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