[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc4138bis-04.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Mon, 03 November 2008 09:39 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc4138bis-04.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 2008-11-03 IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-13 Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC. Comments: The document is clear and well written. Just nits: - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: RTO, MSS - You don't need to expand the well known term "TCP". But if you do it, it should also be at first occurrence. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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