[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-basic-schemes-revised-06

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Fri, 05 December 2008 09:35 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-basic-schemes-revised-06.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 5 Deember 2008
IESG Telechat date: 11 Dec 2008

Summary:
Ready for PS.  This document addressed all the items form my last call review -
thanks.

Nits/editorial comments:
s9, para 2: In the added sentence: S/ces/References/







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