[Gen-art] Re: Genart review of draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-05 / draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-05

Ok. In that case, you are fine. The MIB Rx is the MIB Doctor Review
group. Your AD will introduce you to them somewhere in the process.

                     Ron

stefaan.de_cnodder@alcatel.be wrote:
> 
> Hi Ron,
> 
> Thanks for the review, see below for some answers
> 
> Ron Bonica wrote:
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for:
>> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-05
>>           -and-
>> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-05
>>
>>
>> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html.
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>>
>> This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track document,
>> except for the following nit:
>>
> 
> In fact, the 2 documents are informational.
> 
>> - The client MIB contains a note to the RFC editor about the reference
>> [DYNSERV]. However, there is no such reference.
>>
> 
> I checked it and the client MIB is Ok, in the server MIB it seems that
> the RFC ed note is incorrect and [DYNSERV] should be replaced by
> [DYNCLNT]. The references in both of the drafts are correct, with the
> exception of the RFC ed note in the server MIB.
> 
> 
>> And two substantial questions:
>>
>> - Can I assume that it has passed MIB Rx Review? (It compiles clean).
>>
> 
> Not sure what MIB Rx review is. I compliled the MIB with Smilent.
> 
>> - Should this MIB *ever* be used in conjuntion with SNMPv1? I know that
>> you *recommend* against it. But it seems that divulging the information
>> in this mib to a hostile party might be pretty bad.
>>
> 
> http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-security.html contains preformatted text for
> the security section and that text was put in the draft. See the text on
> that webpage in the section "-- else if there are no read-write objects
> in your MIB module". The text in the draft is more or less a copy/paste
> from that webpage. Also the other Radius MIBs like
> draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-03.txt are also following the guidelines on
> the mentioned webpage.
> 
> regards,
> Stefaan
> 
> 
>>                                       Ron
>>
>>
> 

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