Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18

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From: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
To: Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18
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Hi Robert,

Please see inline

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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready with Issues
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> Document: draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2019-02-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-23
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21
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> Summary: Ready, but with a process issue for the shepherd and AD to consider.
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> This version addressed all of my comments on version -16. Thank you.
> 
> However, the diff shows that a large number of SHOULDs were changed to
> MUSTs.
> I'm guessing that was in response to a comment in the TSVART review of -16.

Yup.

> This large scale substitution makes me worry - are they really the right
> adjustments? Has the group reviewed and agreed to these normative changes?

The WG has not identified any qualifying exceptional conditions for these requirements when the discussing the DOTS protocol and requirements drafts, hence I updated 
these requirements to use MUST.

> 
> As a nit, I'll note that the additional description of heartbeating creeps into
> specifying protocol rather than requirements.

The additional text in SIG-004 is added to justify the reason for using "SHOULD".

Cheers,
-Tiru 

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