Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mpls-tp-oam-def
Scott Brim <scott.brim@gmail.com> Tue, 10 May 2011 21:13 UTC
Return-Path: <scott.brim@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9CEB2E08AB for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:13:51 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -103.465
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-103.465 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=0.134, BAYES_00=-2.599, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-1, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([64.170.98.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id EEcWycw+NN4G for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:13:51 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-iy0-f172.google.com (mail-iy0-f172.google.com [209.85.210.172]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E4574E089F for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:13:50 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by iyn15 with SMTP id 15so7130904iyn.31 for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:13:50 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=P3d1hqq6Zcj+a11VQRGWHOWpB1oDXsPRJDu2uzxTh/4=; b=oDPyPsLLpDw7bOTHNt41mrJ3HduPdriTlerHuicW1jCwSiAQTNlciErA4D5ZXCN7es wU+X5rgZ4pTI2GCJneY54WTjx99UkGFhcn4Uhz08uRRwcKcHpVZ5etNxJd/mEioYzDbQ 54BFeykeMhaq4hq29YCXZ2nx1vevFvJ3eEztk=
DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type; b=VD+iF/PtX7Yee3VGEInJh21wRvtFbCjHOC4AngAjrz7FIS+yXvHAxJrFWaxytX05rT by1PHoFfehxaDh1F9fsffTqK1BBtHO50R1QXt69+l1pxSzBPlcMkoVisMh6s3vPmx7Th xBXQA9DzqObGDbiF9VpRlnCNPDRLEUSjV7LHU=
Received: by 10.231.51.17 with SMTP id b17mr6139808ibg.0.1305061541104; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:05:41 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Received: by 10.231.30.205 with HTTP; Tue, 10 May 2011 14:05:21 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <FDC72027C316A44F82F425284E1C4C320B0F534012@EUSAACMS0701.eamcs.ericsson.se>
References: <092601cc05c5$b6665e00$23331a00$@huawei.com> <FDC72027C316A44F82F425284E1C4C320B0F534012@EUSAACMS0701.eamcs.ericsson.se>
From: Scott Brim <scott.brim@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 10 May 2011 17:05:21 -0400
Message-ID: <BANLkTin=h42UUM5PnPTFR=mSDDNevUh7Jw@mail.gmail.com>
To: Scott Mansfield <scott.mansfield@ericsson.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1"
Cc: "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>, gen-art <gen-art@ietf.org>, "opsawg-chairs@tools.ietf.org" <opsawg-chairs@tools.ietf.org>, "Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com" <Adrian.Farrel@huawei.com>, "draft-ietf-opsawg-mpls-tp-oam-def@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-opsawg-mpls-tp-oam-def@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mpls-tp-oam-def
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 10 May 2011 21:13:51 -0000
Much better. I have one very small suggestion: in the very last paragraph, the one about "Mgmt", is the last sentence relevant? It would feel better to me just to stop with "This document does not define Management.". But that's aesthetics -- IMHO this version is much better and my comments are satisfied. Scott
- Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mp… Scott Mansfield
- Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mp… Scott Brim
- Re: [Gen-art] Mail regarding draft-ietf-opsawg-mp… Huub helvoort