[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-kato-tls-rfc4132bis-04
Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Tue, 19 January 2010 16:42 UTC
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Hi, I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-kato-tls-rfc4132bis-04 (For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html) Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. draft-kato-tls-rfc4132bis-04 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad (Wassim.Haddad@ericsson.com) Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: The abstract should not contain a reference. The security considerations should also mention the cryptanalysis references about the strenght of the Camelia Cipher suites (as in RFC4132). Regards, Wassim H.
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