[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-rs-05.txt
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Fri, 23 November 2007 18:10 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-rs-05.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-rs-05.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 23 November 2007 IESG Telechat date: 29 November 2007 Summary: Ready for Proposed Standard. There are a few editorial nits to feed to the RFC Editor. Caveat: I am not skilled in the FEC art and although I have enough maths to understand what is going on I have not been able to check that the descriptions in ss8.1-8.3 are (sufficiently) complete and correct. Comments: The current version has addressed all my comments from the last call review. Editorial: s9.2.1: s/packet per packet/packet-by-packet/, s/Even if we mention these attacks/Although these attacks are described/ s9.2.2, para 1: s/may be in some case/may be in some cases/ s9.2.2, TESLA bullet: s/Yet/However/ s9.2.2, last para: s/Nonetheless, in case there is any concern of the threat of object corruption/Nonetheless, if there is any risk of object corruption/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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