[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sidr-rescerts-provisioning-10
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Tue, 23 August 2011 14:24 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sidr-rescerts-provisioning-10
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-rescerts-provisioning-10 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Aug-23-2011 IETF LC End Date: Unknown IESG Telechat date: Aug-25-2011 Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 1 Nits/Editorial: I think it will be helpful to identify either in the Abstract or in Terminology section what exactly is a "resource". I do not think you mean traditional HTTP resources like files or dynamically generated content, etc. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani@alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/
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