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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 06 June 2017 17:56 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt
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Francis, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot position.

Alissa

> On May 17, 2017, at 8:39 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20170516
> IETF LC End Date: 20170515
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready with Nits
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - 1 page 2: as the document cannot be understood without reading the
>  RFC 7940 the reference to RFC 79040 must be moved as early as
>  possible (I suggest just after the LGRs introduction and the warning
>  "However, the reader is expected to have some familiarity..." emphased
>  and moved to earlier in the section.
> (I already raised thos concern at my first review, it wasn't fixed
> but for this second review I had the 82 pages of RFC 7940 with me :-)
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
> 
> PS: I don't think it will work for the languages I used but it is
> an information document based on some experiments so what matters
> is it can help even it is not for general cases...
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