[Gen-art] Gen Art LC review of: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09
Avshalom Houri <AVSHALOM@il.ibm.com> Wed, 17 March 2010 09:37 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2010-03-17 (late - sorry) IESG last call date: 2010-03-12 Summary: The document is ready to be published as an informational RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: Noen Nits/editorial comments: Line 532 Error response, send by the Responding node indicating lost -> Error response, sent by the Responding node indicating lost Line 795 **) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be send as payload --> **) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be sent as payload avshalom
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