[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-05

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Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-05
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2024-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document updates the maximum allowed length of Nonce to 128 octets for the
Online Certificate Status Protocol (OCSP). OCSP is used for checking the status
of a certificate, and the Nonce extension is used to cryptographically bind an
OCSP response message to a particular OCSP request message. This document also
modifies Nonce section to clearly define the encoding format and values
distinctively for an easier implementation and understanding. This document
obsoletes RFC 8954 and provides updated ASN.1 modules for OCSP, updates RFC
6960.

The document is well written and easy to read.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None

Thanks for this document,

Ines