[Gen-art] draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brc@zurich.ibm.com> Wed, 23 November 2005 14:54 UTC
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Elwyn Davies is on vacation in New Zealand, but with extraordinary
zeal, he sent me an SMS message with a Gen-ART mini-review of
draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt
[Duh, I don't know how to get SMS messages from my cell phone into
my email.]
Almost ready with nits
Should note that it updates 2778 and 3863 [in the Abstract].
[BC - 2778 is given as an Informative reference.
Are we sure it isn't actually a downref Normative reference?]
Editorial nits to be sent later.
Brian, channelling Elwyn
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