[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-more-twamp-01
Avshalom Houri <AVSHALOM@il.ibm.com> Mon, 18 May 2009 09:57 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-more-twamp-01.txt More Features for the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol - TWAMP Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 18-May-2009 IETF LC End Date: 19-May-2009 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC Major issues: none Minor issues: none Few typos: lines 177-178 recommendations for new features in TWAMP. There are a growing number TWAMP implementations at present, and wide-spread usage is -> recommendations for new features in TWAMP. There is a growing number of TWAMP implementations at present, and wide-spread usage is line 358 - CONTROL,value -> CONTROL, value line 368 - CONTROL,value -> CONTROL, value line 416 - "IETF Consensus" -> "IETF Review". IANA comment: https://datatracker.ietf.org/idtracker/draft-ietf-ippm-more-twamp/comment/95487/ Thanks --Avshalom
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