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Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 24 June 2015 21:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00
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Thanks for your review, Tom. Authors, is there an answer to Tom’s question?

jari

On 17 Jun 2015, at 22:15, Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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> Document:  draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00
> Reviewer:  Tom Taylor
> Review Date:      17 June 2015
> IETF LC End Date: 17 June 2015
> IESG Telechat date: 25 June 2015
> 
> Summary: This is a very short document expanding on a sentence in RFC 6665 to make clear the requirements surrounding use of GRUUs in the SIP event framework. It is probably good to go except for a minor issue of terminology that needs clarification. The reviewer apologizes for not being current on that terminology if it is a matter of common usage.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: The term "local target" is used in the text (and in RFC 6665. RFC 3261 speaks of a remote target, but not a local one. In which document is "local target" defined?
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> Nits/editorial comments: None.
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