[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hansen-2717bis-2718bis-uri-guidelines-06.txt

"Spencer Dawkins" <spencer@mcsr-labs.org> Fri, 21 October 2005 19:54 UTC

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I had reviewed version 05 of this draft and chatted with the authors on a 
couple of points, so "no objection to publication as a BCP", but there's one 
incoherent part, at the top of page 10:

   5.  If Expert Review recommends registration 'provisional' or
       'provisional' registration, IANA adds the registration to the
       appropriate registry.

What was this actually saying? I can't begin to guess...

Otherwise, no problem, of course.

Spencer 


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