[Gen-art] Gen-ART TC Review of draft-elie-nntp-list-additions-04 (was RE: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-elie-nntp-list-additions-03)

["McCann Peter-A001034" <[e-mail]>]

Hi, Julien,

Yes, your update resolves my comments.  I have no further issues
with the draft.  Good luck on the telechat.

-Pete

Julien ÉLIE wrote:
> Hi Peter,
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
>> comments you may receive. 
>> 
>> Document: draft-elie-nntp-list-additions-03
>> Reviewer: Pete McCann
>> Review Date: 2010-07-19
>> IETF LC End Date: 2010-07-16 (sorry late) IESG Telechat date: unknown
>> 
>> Summary: Ready
>> 
>> Major issues: none
>> 
>> Minor issues: none
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> The BNF listing "newsgroup-alias" in Section 4.2 is a little
>> confusing as the RHS use of the non-terminal "newsgroup-alias" is
>> given following a comment.  It is on the next line, so this might be
>> valid BNF, but maybe you can re-work it a little....
> 
> I have just released a -04 version which takes into account your
> comment. 
> Thanks again for it.
> I hope it is now fine.
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-elie-nntp-list-additions/
>    
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-elie-nntp-list-additions-04.txt
> 
> In case you see other nits, do not hesitate to tell me.
> 
> For your information, IESG telechat date is scheduled to be on
> 2010-08-12 according to the data tracker.  I see that you wrote
> "unknown" in your comment.  
> 
> Have a nice week,