[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-resumption-07.txt

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Thu, 17 September 2009 21:50 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-resumption-07.txt

For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed
Standard.

Typo
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Section 3 page 7:

s/livensss/liveness/


Thanks
Suresh